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A Poem for History
Take one old castle, a knight or two,
then take a king and queen who,
rule the castle, and also the land
then take the history from one old hand.
Take a world war one and two,
and add it to your pot of stew,
then mix it up until it tastes right
and while eating it,think of all the brave knights.
If they had not have fought in the world war 2 and 1
then this land just wouldn't be done.
If it weren't for all those knights, you see
here would not be you and me.
So history isn't about some old dead guys who did great things,
but is about the past, any of that make a bell ring?
So when you are in your next history lesson, say
"If it wern't for all those people who took part in the wars, we would not have our land the way we do today"
By Georgia B
Age 10
Class 6KR
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7 comments:
That poem was amazing, Georgia! (just FYI: it's Brandon commenting here)
Whoa! could you write any better?
ha ha like the last verse
see you soon
p.s why are you not at school
Great rhythm in your poetry and some wondeful lines and serious food for thought. Well done
Michelle
Hi Connor, it's the author here, Georgia (Katina don't class this as a comment because I'm the author)
this is me replying to a question from Connor MS, my answer is that I had a stomach ache.
Georgia
i dont know brandon. could i write better?
georgia
thanks for your comment, michelle,!! and i really like that u came 2 our school 2 tell us about bodmin bookworm or else i would be very very very bored right now but now that i know about bodmin bookworm, i log onto it everyday!!
thanks again
georgia
great peom georgia it was fantastic!you should become a peom writer!
from bo
p.s. it is my nick name its chloe typing here
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